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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Dreamers I’m standing in a line, it seems With other souls with other dreams Each one awaits his given turn As moments tick and candles burn And all the eyes are fixed upon The silver gleams on field and pond Reflections on the trees and hedge From dreams beyond the mountains edge So patiently we wait our turn No hurried step, no dire yearn And yet we stand in starlight’s beam Each one in line to catch a dream If I could have but one desire I’d not allow the candle's fire To waste the wick til I have seen All those in line obtain their dream A dreamer is a dreamer’s friend And all possess a poet pen Elizabeth Santos |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To see everyone's dreams come true.. What a wonderful dream...You've a wonderful heart, Liz...  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
a dream catcher be and poetry flows from pen dreams are poets friends Finally fixed :) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
And are we not in all just the most wonderful company to be found... Thank you for this, Lady Santos...it's a heart's pleaser.... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Elizabeth: If we are all dreamers, you must be the Queen! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A lovely from a lovely. |
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
beautiful phrasing and flow... well done. Miranda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ 'If I could have but one desire I’d not allow the candle's fire To waste the wick til I have seen All those in line obtain their dream' For I am but a dreamer too Can I stand in line with you ? I will share my ink of think On the edge of poetry's brink We will write until the dawn For dreams well-penned are never gone Captured in the words of rhyme Lasting into infinity of time *Thank your for the beautiful inspiration, sweet poetess.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Whatever I read of you, Is an inspiration true, I wish a dreamer to be, I line up, a pen with me! Beautiful rendering Elizabeth, and your heart is always showing! Lovely. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, Thank you for the comments, and incidentally, West is Best Can I e-mail you? Interloper, LOvely Haiku from the master Haikuist - is that a word? I don't think so. How about Master of Haiku Thanks Thank you, sweet lady in white Trillium, NO, just one in the line up But I do dream a lot Sy, Thank you, dear friend Miranda, Your comments are very link Margie, Margie, Come and stand beside me in a row Of poets who will never let drams go I do believe your pen flows day and night 25 hours of lovely, pure delight I never even see you take a breath POst after post into the poet's nest Dream after dream in wondrous verse devine So come over here and stand with me in line THanks, Marge Mysteria, Your comments are always so sweet THank you for the verse, and keep that pen in hand! Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my fellow dreamer. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, a dreamer, I definitely like that, yes.... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, Your heart is showing in this, consider me a dreamer too  The flow and rhyme and tender thought is wonderful. Whenever I read your poetry, the world is so lovely through your eyes. Thank you for being a poet.And of course, you saw this coming....into my library this goes~ Melissa~ |
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