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SILLY WAWCHEO
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since 2001-07-06
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Mighigan

0 posted 2001-07-31 01:37 AM


Only a Friend
when I tell people no she's not my daughter
or my sister either, she is not kin at all
I feel as if I should say....she is the one that makes my day
how can I expain to those who don't know
how much I love YOU
everyday my love just grows
how can I explain to them that
you are the only one I can sit quietly with
and feel as if I just had the greatest conversation
how can I explain that
just to walk beside you
makes me warm inside
how can I expain that
just being in the same room with you
brings me such joy
I don't have any of the answers this
I can't explain.....so I just say
she's only a friend
the one I can't live without

© Copyright 2001 SILLY WAWCHEO - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-31 01:43 AM


An excellent selection for your first post, sir. I welcome you and look forward to more.....
Saunni
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2 posted 2001-07-31 02:17 AM


Silly Wawcheo, excellent first poem! The person in your poem that you are writing about,is very lucky to have you. Keep writing, My Friend, and Silly Wawcheo right back at you.  

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-07-31 02:27 AM


Hi there, very nice first poem, sensitive, loving, caring, really enjoyed.

Welcome to this friendly site, you'll feel at home here, I'm sure.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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4 posted 2001-07-31 08:03 AM


ah.. so very nicely done... welcome to Passions...

I look forward to reading more...


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5 posted 2001-07-31 10:29 AM



No one is "only" someone when looked at by eyes in love...

Well done, and Welcome to Passions!

VAS
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6 posted 2001-07-31 10:58 AM


Welcome!  A tender, yet powerful piece!!!


Nan
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7 posted 2001-07-31 10:59 AM


It seems to me Silly that explanations simply aren't necessary...  I'd personally move mountains to share this kind of love... and I'd say you and your lady deserve each other...
Sunshine
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8 posted 2001-07-31 11:56 AM


Welcome to Passions, Wawcheo.  Nothing silly about this.  Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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9 posted 2001-07-31 12:35 PM


Welcome!   this is so heartfelt.....I liked this very much......touching my heart already  
illusion
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10 posted 2001-07-31 01:20 PM


You and your friend are both very lucky - you have something quite special.   I enjoyed your poem very much.  
SILLY WAWCHEO
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since 2001-07-06
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Mighigan
11 posted 2001-08-02 11:04 PM


Thanks for your kind responses

Susan
pain shared is divided,
love shared is multiplied

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