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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-30 02:45 PM



we shall not forget
our eyes met conveying love
forever promised
~*~
remembering us
verbal and silent promise
one to the other
~*~
love and faithfulness
when together or apart
we are one in love

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-30 02:46 PM



love is circumspect
but in the right hands, giving
love is for living

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-07-30 02:50 PM


nice.. both of you....

enjoy your takes on love Interloper... and Lady... you always seem ready to reply in kind.. or is that kindness...


VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-30 02:56 PM


love in this form's, faint
recollection's perplexing
foggy in time's past

jellybeans
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4 posted 2001-07-30 03:09 PM


ok this is beautiful, and what it is supposed to be...as I put flowers on the grave of what mine turned out to be...but it seems I was partner to the killing, so do I deserve to mourn...sigh...sorry for the downer comments on such a beautiful poem......sigh
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-07-30 03:59 PM




"we are one in love"
though two in life
but with a love
that lasts eternally
we'd survive all strife

Lovely......

I really enjoyed it

Thank you
********************



Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-07-30 06:07 PM


we solemnly vow
our love one to another
until time stands still

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-07-30 06:44 PM


Lady ~
can love be wary
cautious, prudent, or discreet
it can be stealthy

Ron ~ Thank you my friend.

VAS ~
love in any form
by my own recollection
clear as fine crystal

jellybeans ~
you say love is dead
remember when it had life
remember the birth

MEM ~
one plus one is one
love's mathematics diverge
two in love are one

LW ~
love's proclamation
solemn words spoken in love
both to each other


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2001-07-30 07:48 PM


Very beautiful sentiments expressed in these Senyrus.  I applaud your evident understanding of these little beauties.
cpalmer
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9 posted 2001-07-30 07:51 PM


Love is such a beautifuly thing!  thanks for sharing this
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

shadow974
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10 posted 2001-07-30 08:05 PM


Beautiful and magical
SEA
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with you
11 posted 2001-07-30 08:10 PM


forever, my love
has be found within your eyes
holding me spellbound

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