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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-07-30 01:47 PM


i've lost the feeling,
that special feeling when around your loved one.

the great expansion of the emotions,
the lightness of feelings.

i've lost all that,
when you walked away.

you walked away,
with my heart and soul in your clutch.

never to return ?
i do not know...

but i hope.....
i can have that feling back again.

that feeling...
love, that's it ....i remember now...

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-30 01:50 PM


ah..glad you at least remember what it is called... terrible to lose that..and the understanding of what it is..


Punk Angel
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US
2 posted 2001-07-30 01:54 PM


this ones pretty nice, but its not ur best!

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??    
~*Krista*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2005-02-21 12:43 PM


good one
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