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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-30 01:33 PM

~*~

In your we is “I”
Encompassing us in “love”
Lips readying “you”

~*~

As your “you” nears me
See the “love” in these my eyes
And the “I” in we

~*~

I hold us to me
Love all that you see in me
You, come meet my lips

~*~

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-07-30 01:35 PM

wow, this was awesome!!! totally and absolutly creative! loved it!!

death is certain, life is not
have u ever needed somebody so bad, u cry when u arent around them, and still miss them when u r around them?

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-30 01:36 PM

Loving words spoken
I love you and you love I
the answer is yes

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-07-30 01:38 PM

A yummy poem. LOL

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-30 01:44 PM

yes..softly romantic and filled with tenderness... nicely done

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-30 01:46 PM

Lady In White-
   'I' 'love' the way 'you' did these.
   Beautiful thoughts, my friend..
   Very nicely done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-07-30 03:47 PM

Ah.......lovely....lovely way of saying "the three little words".....

Beautiful....and creative.....

Thank you
**********************

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

7 posted 2001-07-30 05:10 PM

I really liked this one. It's so unique. Wish I had thunk of it! more, more!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-07-30 05:57 PM

LIW, lovely imagery!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-07-30 06:23 PM

Beautiful and creative, much enjoyed your take on the three words..
Sandra

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

10 posted 2001-07-31 11:49 AM

Thank you all for your comments, especially on the "creativity"....this one was a pleasure to construct....

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