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At The River.........
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At The River......... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Shall we meet at the river? at days end as the sun dissolves and bleeds tangerine into the water…….. Let’s catch up on the old times we’ve never shared let’s remember all the pieces of our lives separately……….. then combine them making your memories mine…… allowing mine to become yours Take my hand walk with me follow the path that leads to friendship at the river…… ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
SEA... I have a thing for rivers... and surely enjoyed this... thanks for sparking a couple of memories... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as the sun dissolves and bleeds tangerine into the water =========================== *smiling here* ... what did I tell ya  just keep thinking like that...seeing things thru POET eyes... cause you are ya know   slow burn ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Very nice, enjoyed. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- What lovely thoughts of friendship you've penned. Smiling here. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"as the sun dissolves and bleeds tangerine" A very nice image and lovely poem, Susan. I'll take your hand. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
We will meet where the Mad river runs into the sea ... just along about sunset |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
SEA...who would know that you would realize that the inlets lead to many lovely memories... well done little one... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Ahhhhhhh, the river of friendship rolls on~ Nicely imaged thoughts, sweetie~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Beautifully done! I enjoyed this very much Cindi |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May the river always flow free for you, my friend. Nicely written, SEA. All writing comes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful river indeed. Look who has become the proud owner of the eyes she always had. You know, the ones that see what others so easily miss. Very nice read indeed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Susan~ Can I be bold enough to say that this is one of your best?!  Wow, the imagery and use of metaphors to describe the roads of friendship is great."at days end as the sun dissolves and bleeds tangerine into the water" what awesome-imagery packed lines! If you keep this up, I'm sure to be awed by future poems by you. I am impressed, into my library this goes~ Melissa~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron~ me too thank you Janet~ I'm trying you set a fine example thank you Seymour~ thank you Vicky~  thank you Michael~ you already have taken my hand sweet friend and I thank you for your warm friendship Interloper~ yes, you know the Mad River don't forget the Russian River too...thanks for knowing exactly where I mean Lady~ thank you so much Marge~ you are wonderful, thank you Cindi~ thank you very much LW~ and you, thank you Cowboy~ I'm tryin... thank you Mark Melissa~ wow....gosh, thank you so so much!! That made my night! What a wonderful thing to say! thank you ~SEA "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
That's an especially nice way to make friends near the tangerine river. Very much enjoyed, SEA. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I love this! I truly do....what a picture you have painted here. Lovely! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--What a beautiful look at a place and friendship. Very well done! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful image/world you've created SEA...wouldn't be nice if we all could partake... jwesley |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I had to come in because this had the same title as one of my poems written in 2000 or 1999. Totally different subject, though. Well yes it was about being at the river and it was about a friendship, but it was more than that, too. I actually think it's posted in Spiritual Journeys. Enjoyed the read! |
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