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Parker
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0 posted 2001-07-30 01:45 AM


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Lace

Dear, Let me look at you once again
No wait, just as you are in that lace
It barely hides that nakedness, you flaunt
And my desire for you like a flood, won't subside

If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight
It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger
That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost
My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness

You are my black widow with your web of lust,
I am but your prey, flaying franticly poisoned by your sweetness
My mind so drunkenly consumed as your blissful bite imprisons me
Like the spider I could die after having you again, never knowing I am dead

Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment
Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun
When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath
Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again

Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop
Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness
I can see hunger in your eye's as my hands run over your skin warming with each touch
Here let me remove those straps dear, I know you want to rush,
But I love to see you in that Lace.


James Parker Haley (c)Nov 2000


If this mp3 wont play download it here.
http://www.asylumcafe.com/Lace.mp3



[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 07-30-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2001-07-30 06:50 AM


Parker,
I loved this the first time round, but the second time is even better.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

SEA
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2 posted 2001-07-30 09:50 AM


Parker,
what can I possibly say, your voice is sooooooo smooth.....I love this....and I would never beg you to stop.....only beg for more......   you did good Handsome....real good  



.....by the way....I'll be singing that song all day now too  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 07-30-2001).]

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-07-30 09:58 AM


If I could kiss you a thousand times tonight
It would not be enough to satisfy this held hunger
That explosive energy when we are one, Oh love I'm lost
My mind is a spiraling chaos, in this need to taste your woman-ness
==================================

Oh love; let me take you, again and again to that moment
Where haze is the chaos that is my lips upon the heat of a burning sun
When your pleasure is the arch of a moment taken to eternity in the gasps of a breath
Oh, let me breath you in as I taste your need to have what I live to give you again and again

Love, my lips will chase and run down your every curve until you beg stop
Knowing that stop is not what you want and your voice is just an echo of weakness
============================

ya know tis way too early to have ones blood pressure up so high  
AHHHHH P-man...poet prince of sigh and swoon...thank you for induldging us begging ladies

this imagery in this is lovely and the write is romantic and intense...
and ya know how I love those S's ...and your C's aint half bad either...
you know like in "chase" and "arch"     ROFL
Oh lord....wheres my raspberry tea...I need a drink    

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2001-07-30 10:24 AM


Oh, to have a man read poetry..there is ALMOST nothing sweeter.
Sensual words flow like wine..
Sandra

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2001-07-30 10:55 AM


Yep...smooth is the word...well worth the wait Parker!  
Corinne
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6 posted 2001-07-30 11:27 AM


That's the stuff, Park!

*wink

Cor

Constance
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7 posted 2001-07-30 11:45 AM


All the above, Parker! Lordy Parker, I'm new here but I'm glad it didn't take me long to discover you! You melted all the ice in my drink---you rascal!
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-07-31 11:48 AM


silly silly me...
I was so busy swooning...I forgot to put this in my library...
I'll file it under P ...
for P-man...and perfect poetry  

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

illusion
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9 posted 2001-07-31 01:09 PM


I never managed to download the audio, but still enjoyed this sensual beauty.   Great write, lucky lady.  
Dee
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10 posted 2001-08-02 05:20 PM


Ok I admit it! I couldn't help myself. I just had to bump this back up.  

Dee  

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-08-03 01:11 PM


cant wait to get back on MY computer so i can hear that voice.....*sigh*...wont be long til i can keep you up at nite  

great reading love..better, i'm sure, when YOU read it..  

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.."  -demi moore

Martie
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12 posted 2001-08-03 01:29 PM


Parker--I still can't hear you...my computer is to dumb!! (no, it's not me)  Loved the poem though!
SmittenKitten
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13 posted 2001-08-03 01:43 PM


  wooo, Parker!  For the ladies indeed!  I think the guys could learn a little something though    I'm very disappointed that the sound didn't work for me...I waited until it completed downloading!  Ohh well.  It was awesome just on its own  
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

oh2beme
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14 posted 2001-08-03 08:17 PM


WHEW!!!!! Where's my cigarettes? I need one NOW! Very well recited Parker, but very well written also. Thanks for the rush.
rwood
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15 posted 2001-08-03 08:44 PM


My Goodness, you set that lace on Fire Parker. What can I say. A lace man that can wait! Passionate read. Thank You!
Sincerely,
Regina

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
16 posted 2001-08-19 02:14 AM


OH MY GOD!!

.....i wont tell you what that did to me..but..pardon me while i regain my composure.....

i just got to hear the recital..  !!!

so HAPPY to have my OWN computer again..! lol

*sigh*...off to bed with me now...  

, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

CocoBaci
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17 posted 2001-08-19 02:33 AM


HOLY CHIKEETA! this is magnificent Parker, MY GOODNESS! sweetie you really got it going on over there geeeeez....

I loved it I adored it I'm gonna treasure this one   teehee

SmOOOOchesOnCheek2uSweetie this was the perfect compliment 2 my nite2nite...

*~coco~*

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
18 posted 2001-08-19 02:46 AM


having someone read a poem to you IS the nicest way...beautiful...now someone pass me something iced...giggle...helen
helen smith
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19 posted 2001-08-19 09:12 AM


ohhhhhhhhh ... there must be a law  against this    !......     what a great   piece of work Thank you
Kitty**
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20 posted 2001-08-19 12:00 PM



I WANT YOU HERE WITH ME!!!!!!
NOW!!!!

Great writing and a most luring voice !

Kitty

Parker
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21 posted 2001-08-19 07:22 PM


Dee, one time around is never good enough, 3 or 4 maybe.. oh you meant the reading...

SEA, their is nothing in this world better then a girl that begs...

Janet, like I said who am I to denie some begging ladies...  

catalinamoon, thank you very much...  

serenity, thank you sweet friend.  

Corinne, now don't be winking unless its an invitation..  

Constance, well if i'm melting ice then something must be working...  

Janet,  

illusion, well there really is no lady... but thanks anyway.  

Dee, so your saying you like to bump in the middle of the night... did I mention I like to get bumped too.  

dg, sure keep me up at night..  

Martie, sorry don't know whats wrong. Maybe you need a newer version of Internet Explorer to play sound... thanks for replying.  

SmittenKitten, well if you really want just save the file by the link and open it with an mp3 player.  

oh2beme, thank you very much.  

rwood, well I can wait only so long..  

dg, so what did it do to you...  

coco, did I tell you I love smooches...  

1slick_lady, yes and I run a personal whispering business on the side..  

helen, I think there is..   maybe you should handcuff me.  

Kitty, yeah say that from a 1000 miles away...    

Parker


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