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ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
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0 posted 2001-07-29 09:18 PM


They all seem to have
Ulterior motives.

One clings to the leg
Like a child refusing
To let go.

One tells of love and
Filling--but between
The lines, what does
He show?

Then the one I love
Refuses to love me
Back, but seeks to
Continue playing games.

Seems an Unholy Trinity.

Am I wrong, or do
They all seek
Ultimate, complete
Control?

Pulling and tugging,
Wrestling for a prize
Until they have
Destroyed it; unseeing
In their blind eyes.

Who really wishes for
Me to be happy,
Without their own gain,
Designs in mind?

Who is really a true
Friend?
All wanting it their
Way.

I refuse to stand
On crutches,
Will live by my
Own hand,
And if my choice
Is to be alone,
Who are they
To reprimand?

When someone comes
Along to show me
Love is true,
I'll give ten times
What I am given;
Until that day comes,
I refuse to let
Myself be driven...

For I am an empty
Shell,
My blood and heart
Sucked dry.

Trying to please
Everyone,
Unable to please
Anyone...

I am tired.
I am done.

ShannonM



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1 posted 2001-07-29 09:23 PM


heartfelt writing, Shannon...and all too true. Those who try to drag you down are not friends....those who use need as their claim on you are not friends...those that make you smile at the sound of their name - now THAT'S a friend!  
azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
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2 posted 2001-07-30 12:04 PM


You are too steps ahead of the game for recognizing how much better off you would be alone than with someone who brings you down!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
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3 posted 2001-07-30 12:18 PM


I know what you mean, ShannonM, and they don't sound like friends to me...  I've found that there are MANY classifications/levels of people with whom one surrounds one's self in one's life:  people you recognize and say "hi" to on the street, co-workers, colleagues, acquaintances, business partners, lovers, friends, best-friends, and soulmates, probably in that order.  It's important to learn the distinctions and decide who is which in one's life.  Trust must be the hardest thing to achieve and maintain in today's world, and it helps to have tests and levels to apply -- that way, one can have a much better idea as to who can truly be called a friend.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
4 posted 2001-07-30 05:47 PM


Thank you everyone, for your replies and your insight.

ShannonM

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