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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Upset We walked together through the fingers of time, like sand and fell into the wind and it carried us places, as it moved through the trees and leafs and arms. we were in a million pieces, you and I, all at once. The fingers manipulated me painfully and no tree was left untouched. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Wonderful write! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
This is a nice descriptive poem. Lots of good imagery and detail. It also leaves a sharp kind of pain... ShannonM |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
first, your screen name is my family name.... "samia"... before my grandfather changed it.... but that's nothing to do with the poem just something that's part of me *shrug* and attracted me to your post... the poem was succinct with well constructed images and i'll look forward to reading more... nicely done.... thank you for the read |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, great imagery. Felt like I was there. Well done!  All writing comes |
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1slippery_lady Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20Ohio, USA |
Very nice poem, thank you for sharing |
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