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Trina
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0 posted 2001-07-29 05:49 PM




until you have ancestors
of color who were treated
like wild beasts and savages
until you receive harsh treatment
as they did
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until you live in captivity
and watch your whole family
fall apart
and witness your babies sold
to service another family
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until you walk into a store
and feel victimized
due to the hard stares
of people assuming
you're only there for trouble
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until you get the crap
knocked out of you
because of your skin color
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until you spend a lifetime
behind bars for a crime
you never committed
just because in some people's eyes
you fit the description
of a criminal
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until you feel the hate and rage
of one who has just been labeled
a "Nigger" or compared to a
filthy disgusting animal
you don't know what it's like
to be black

until the hatred,
the racism,
the labels,
all end,
the people of color
will always know
what it's like to be black

[This message has been edited by Trina (edited 07-29-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-29 06:50 PM


Trina,
the fact is I could never know. But I'm not one of the people who judge by color of skin. I smile at everyone, and know everyone has feelings just like me. No one can change what happened in the past, even when we wish we could.....how we behave today should be what counts. No matter the color of your skin. No matter your religion, or your political party, or your disability, or financial status......all of it....
very powerful poem  

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2 posted 2001-07-29 06:54 PM



There is discrimination of all kinds, against all colors, race, denominations...

This piece is strong and stark, and could fit any of the above.

It's our job to erase discrimination.

This is a start.

Good job!

Trina
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3 posted 2001-07-29 06:55 PM


Yes, I know there are alot of people who feel exactly how you do, I feel that way too. There are also alot of people who feel exactly the opposite so I guess this is written from their point of view. Though the past can not be changed it should not be forgotten entirely but it should also not be used against anyone else for something they had no control over.
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4 posted 2001-07-29 06:57 PM


Trina,
yes!!
very nicely said  

Trina
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5 posted 2001-07-29 06:58 PM


Thanx Sunshine, I'm glad you think it's a start. Thank you for reading.

Take care,

Trina

Trina
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6 posted 2001-07-29 06:59 PM


Thanx Sea  
doreen peri
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7 posted 2001-07-29 07:03 PM


well, yes, it's true
i do not know

but know, i do,
of blacks who look at me
with hatred because
my skin is white

but not

the history of
families eats my soul
alive,
my father's greek
lebanese
dark skin
treated like
he didn't belong
with mom's
blonde
blue-eyed
fair

and me?

i went to dance
with my date,
black

who's daggered
eyes stared at white skinned
bartenders, hatred alive,
whispering his
great grandfather's
past to me

as if i had
something to do with it

"they'll make us wait for a drink
because they think i shouldn't be
with you"

let's dance, i said.
i'm not them.
i'm me.


Trina
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8 posted 2001-07-29 07:08 PM


That was so beautifully written. I understand that perfectly , everyone will experience some form of discrimination and others may hate them because of their skin color or because they may have a certain stereotype of how that person may be. The world is a really messed up place to live in sometimes.

Take care,

Trina

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-07-29 09:22 PM


So well expressed Trina...James
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10 posted 2001-07-29 09:46 PM


Until you bury a past that is a distant past you will not know peace. Caucasions were slaves on more than one ocassion. Caucasions are being beaten in this country for being white and incarcerated for being poor. I'm no bigot and will not be an apologist nor remain silent when I see customers in my business go to a black associate for commisioned help because he's black. My ancestors have been in North America for 360 years and none owned slaves but some did fight and die in a war for the freedom of all men. My father was the first caucasion to join the NAACP in Pittsburgh Pa. and I won't cower from this topic.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

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11 posted 2001-07-29 10:06 PM


You make excellent points, Trina. No white person can know what it is like to be black. If I were asked to describe it, I would imagine it to be similar to myself going to a party for the rich and famous, being looked at as if I didn't belong, as if I could steal the silverware at any moment. I would feel very defensive and angry at their presumptions that I was so inferior to them because I was different. It has to be a very difficult way to live. We have come a long way since Rosie Parks, however. Blacks not only sit anywhere on the bus they want...sometimes they own the bus companies! Unfortunately, the large majority does not.  Hopefully, the equalization of the races will continue until all are indeed considered equal. Will it happen in our lifetime? Probably not...but it will happen. One thing I admire very much about the black race is that their history, unfair as it may be, bands them together in such a way they draw strength from each other and are joined in a common goal...a demand for equality. This is a very powerful bond....and it will make a difference. Thank you, Trina, for this thought-provoking piece. Only through communication and acknowleldgement of a situation can a solution be possible.
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12 posted 2001-07-29 11:02 PM


In birth, we differ, in life we differentiate. I wish all could just respect differences and be at one. I've learned to love the good in any person, and despise the bad the same. Bonding with anyone that will bond with me. If they can get past the fact that I was the first white female on an all male naval baseball team, the first on an all black Volley ball team in my high school, one of the first on an all girl soccer team to play and Defeat the Boys teams (There was no one else to play) in California.  And one of the first white females to lead a school protest over the school board authorized segregation of hispanic/white/black/asian. They wouldn't even let us play ball together! We peacefully went to the gym and played basketball for a day to show the faculty that we could get along. Sounds silly but true!
So I speak from experience on some matters of prejudice. I took a lot of heat from all races and walks of life. I'll never know what it is like to be black, But I do know a lot of great people of every color and unique quality. I want to be a quality person. The most important thing I can do is teach my children "to each his own". And to love and be loved. Respecting the good in everyone, every way possible. It can start here! Just as being beheaded in public was once acceptable in life, which now it is not, maybe someday this too shall be only in the past.
Sincerely,
Regina

Trina
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13 posted 2001-07-30 04:32 PM


I would like to thank you all for reading and posting your thoughts on this topic. Everyone has some type of history that isn't so great, I never said any other person of a different race or color can't get beat up because of it but being that I am black I honestly don't know what it's like to be white to write about how they suffer and the harsh treatment they receive. Being that I like to write my poems from different points of view taking the view of a person of a different race is definitely a challenge for me. I just want everyone to know I do know everyone receives some type of harsh treatment and at times can feel inferior to people of another race or even of the same race for many different reasons.
BloomingRose
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14 posted 2001-07-30 11:17 PM


Trina,
It is sad that sometimes our human eyes cannot see with our heart. We cannot let others distorted views control our life, or let past or present selfish ignorance shape the future.
Pity judgemental fools, they too have to stand before God one day.


((BIG HUG))
    Deb

Trina
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15 posted 2001-07-31 04:08 PM


And I feel sorry for them when they do. My best way of dealing with ignorance is by ignoring it.
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