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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Within you I see a passion Like none other I have known A passion that still haunts my heart From too few nights spent alone I remember how you held me Like you had never loved before And what it was like to let you go Thinking I'd never see you anymore They say that life is a journey We all have a different path to go And it seems I always end up Traveling dark and lonely roads So, let's make this journey a slow one Take our time and get it right Let's give love a chance To grow wings and take flight [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Jeffrey! Very nice! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Tender and truthful. Enjoyed. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jeff- Very lovely thoughts..  Nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I once wrote a piece that said "we started in the middle and reached a quick end"...it's so much better to go your way! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like the hope at the end of this one, Jeffrey, good to see you. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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