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ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng

0 posted 2001-07-29 11:50 AM


I used to sit in my office chair
On a slanty floor
On a piece of carpet
Aiming for the door,

The carpet kept the chair in place
But each and every day
I'd reach up for a paper clip
And the chair would rollaway!

I'd roll across the room
Unless I could get a grip
On the edge of my desk
Saving me from the tip

I'd have to drag myself back,
Back up to my desk
And by the time I reached it,
I would have to rest!

But now, my floor is stable
Does not have a tilt
And the whole thing is carpeted
And hangs on like a nice, thick quilt

So now, when I reach for that paper clip
Each and every day,
My chair stays, it does not slip--
I no longer rollaway!

ShannonM

[This message has been edited by ShannonM (edited 07-29-2001).]

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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
1 posted 2001-07-29 11:57 AM


enjoyed, however, I have to admit I was thinking about a "Walter Mitty" trip in that rollaway scene and was also thinking that the absence of it ever occurring again might be kind of sad...am I right?

glad your floor's more stable though, a good foundation is important

Virginia

ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
2 posted 2001-07-29 12:12 PM


Actually, it was quite the pain in the butt, though funny...I might miss it's distraction when I'm having trouble at the computer!

ShannonM

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-07-29 04:49 PM


Amusing when read literally;  profound if considered metaphorically...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

Samia
Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47
Earth of corse!
4 posted 2001-07-29 07:32 PM


Hi Shannon, I loved this! Very delightful, but I'm guessing there's something deep in this poem. I think I'll read it again.   Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading all your posts.
-Samia

azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
5 posted 2001-07-29 07:36 PM


(giggling profusely)...I wonder why it is in my office they put these little plastic things under our chairs?  I think they knew the end result, I just know someday I'll keep on rolling out the door still in my chair!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

1slippery_lady
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 20
Ohio, USA
6 posted 2001-07-29 09:54 PM


This was a fun poem, thank you for sharing Shannon.  


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