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Hello, Moon |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hello, Moon Virginia Salter Hello, Moon Oh, white knight of evening low, fully round lending your light to starry-eyed children of earth, would-be lovers your glow enamors entices seduces them into bending to your spell your magic woven about them as web spun to capture their every whim your deep set, tranquil eyes, looking like vast seas, and alluring smile reel them in to your wizardry they fold before you conceding defeat to a summer evening’s trance © August 14, 2000 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"Hello, Moon oh, white knight of evening.... your deep set, tranquil eyes, looking like vast seas, and alluring smile reel them in to your wizardry they fold before you conceding defeat to a summer evening's trance" ========================= Wow - Virgina, I love this, you have some great imagery in this, and you know that Marge will love it too!  Melissa~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh, this is magic! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hello, Moon Oh, white knight of evening low, fully round lending your light to starry-eyed children of earth, would-be lovers ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Simply lovely. Deb |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh how I love to gaze at the moon...thank you for lending me the opportunity with your words beautiful and magical write!~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thank you all, all three of you! So happy you enjoyed this, the moon that evening, while I walked my evening walk, was truly beautiful, truly mesmerizing, I couldn't help but think of young lovers, I thought of one of my favorite songs from the King and I with Deborah Kerr and Yul Brynner, "Hello, Young Lovers" so I composed it mentally on my walk then typed it out when I got home. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*Bump* |
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