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I dream of your return

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walker
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0 posted 07-29-2001 07:37 AM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for walker


Dreams come silently
as I struggle not to fall asleep
Tired of this long day
exhausted from this long night
Waiting for your return
watching as hours just pass
Wandering who you are with
The sience of the night
convinces me
seduces me
lures me
slowly
eye lids closing
no longer angry
no longer caring
I fall asleep
and dream of your return.


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Voiceless
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1 posted 07-29-2001 10:50 AM       View Profile for Voiceless   Email Voiceless   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Voiceless

Sleep always claims one
if you want to sleep or not.
Nicely done

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

azblond
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2 posted 07-29-2001 10:53 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

The z monster wins again!  A great piece!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Honeybee
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3 posted 07-29-2001 10:59 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Oh how I relate to this right now, well expressed.  There's just something about the mystery and innocence of the night that conjures these intense yearnings and memories, isn't there?!~

Melissa~
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4 posted 07-30-2001 09:53 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

eye lids closing
no longer angry
no longer caring
I fall asleep


this is a nice passage as it can be read..that eylids no longer angry no longer caring.... which I think is intriuing..

nice piece
passing shadows
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good one
 
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