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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-29 07:05 AM


In the stillness of the night
I reach out for you only to grasp hold
of the cold and empty sheets
How I long to feel your masculine form
lying next to me in the afterglow of our sweet love
to hear every breath you take
to respond to your sensual touch
How much I want to make your happiness
my responsibility and be the reason
behind your smile

My mind seems to have forgotten
that I can only hold you in my dreams
and for a moment I am alone here
in the darkness of the night
until I escape into my dreams
where I am guided by the light of your love

I enter a world where you and I thrive
in our own Garden of Eden
where love blooms and fluorishes all year round
a place where our love is of the greatest importance
and where no one or nothing can touch us

Here we'll sail love's ocean
drift off into the sunset
and bask in the moonlight of our love
as we ask ourselves -
"Does it get any better than this?"

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-07-29 07:17 AM


A sad start, but ends with such a pleasant dream.

Melton

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-07-29 07:20 AM


Nope! It doesn't get any better. Romance....
Glows from your verse, even in the light of day. Beautiful!
Sincerely,
Regina

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2001-07-29 02:32 PM


...sitting here in the afterglow of a sweet read...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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