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I No Longer Dream
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I No Longer Dream |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I no longer dream of fairytale kisses or ever afters I no longer dream of that white picket fence around a big yard I no longer dream of a life filled with wonder laughter like raindrops I no longer dream no wishes on distant stars no soft summer nights I no longer dream I no longer dream |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Paula, very gentle smile..dreams come anyway, so close yourself not off, for the next one may be the one that comes true..Will be thinking of you |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its cuz you no longer sleep!!! no but really yuh gotta dream o yuh it gets yuh places it just takes longer i know! |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
To give up on dreams is to give up on life, So let it be true for today But when tomorrow comes full of hope Let those dreams take you away. (Please?)  Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Part of me feels the same way as you...because I have been disappointed too many times...but the other part still wants to dream...James |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Dreams stir the spirit and fuel the heart. Keep on dreaming!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I believe you can rekindle the fairytale kisses and soft summer nights, if you just give it another try. Good read. Melton |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree with you to Paula...in fact one of new poems is called Mirage Of Dreams where I compare a mirage in the street to a dream cause when you think a dream is there it's gone just like a mirage.....anyways, good poem...peace!! Nathan |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You don't have to dream, when you have found the real thing. |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
Dreams come for those who wait. Dont get too impattient. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Never lose sight of that dream, Paula, for it's never too late for happiness to find you. Good write. All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
MULE MUFFINS!!!!! Of course you will dream...and they will be super-sized!!! Don't make me come up there and beat some sense into you, Mizzou mama!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
neither do I, Paula, neither do I... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
Lovely Paula. Remember though--- There are dreams, unremembered, Which come to us still, First a whisper, then a golden song, To recall when the heart needs music. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Sometimes when we stop looking for these things...they find us. So sorry to read you sad. Take care, Paula. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
They may come thats true...doesnt mean you have to hope or believe...thanks Logan Walt...sleep? Whats that? LOL...thank you bub.... azblond...thank you Sweet James...yes there is always that part that wont let you give up...thanks shadow974...someday maybe 2dalimit...you are sweet...thanks Nathan...  thank you...inot2B...but for those of us who never have? What then? Snooganzmeister...patience is not one of my better subjects...thanks Lone Wolf...thank you Balladeer...bring it on bad boy heheh...MULE MUFFINS????? Irish Rose...hugs...love ya sis Constance...thank you JLR....hugs to you girl... [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hi Paula, I hope one day the dreams you have put on a shelf, turn into an unexpected happy reality. Hugs, Deb [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 07-31-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Now here is a beautiful but sad poem that I can relate too these days. I like the repeating at the end, Paula. I certainly hope all is well! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well you echoed my mind in this one Paula, and it's a horrible place. You wrote it well. ~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well written, Paula, you speak of my aching heart right now~ Melissa~ |
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