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Samia
Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47
Earth of corse!

0 posted 2001-07-29 01:35 AM


Earth

Oh it was beautiful.
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful -
So full of beauty that
the breasts full of milk
gave milk with ease,
cascading down her body in
rivulets and streams.
And the people drank
thirstily because they
had been thirsty.

Kept inside the mountains,
deep within the rise and fall
of the ocean waves that
pulse through her chest
         where she breaths,
Heat.
Pumped steadily
from the caves that
make up her inner,
give life.

Her breasts,
her tits,
once hard and firm with Youth
soften and sag with Age. She is old.

And beautiful
Beautiful beautiful beautiful.



© Copyright 2001 Samia Hamed - All Rights Reserved
azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
1 posted 2001-07-29 03:14 AM


Beauty spelled out in such a unique way reminds us that the eye of the beholder can also see very different things.  I liked you perspective.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-07-29 06:58 AM



You pen your words with the paint pots of an artist.  It is going to be interesting watching you share your work with us! Thank you for this visual experience!

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