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Break of Dawn
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Break of Dawn |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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and then it wore off I lost the shield of a chemical calm... A trembling child I fell to his bed desperate crypt---at break of dawn... his very essence in his sheets I felt his presence and in the bed where he'd lain dead I found oasis for my head I felt the warmth of understand... I felt peace. Once again, Dad cradled me. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
As his memory will, time and time again..for as long as you have thought, then he will be there..very gentle smile |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
I can relate to this....perhaps not as poignantly as you do, as it was not a death I experienced, but just a long separation from someone I love. But having experienced that pain, I can only imagine what you are going through. Oodles of hugs and warm feelings to you... ~Krista |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ *just hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hugs me sista. Maree |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Karen, just oh hugs Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
one day at a time baby... write it down, let it out. *hugging you* love ya KA me |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- HUGS from me too...BIG ones.  love ya, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I love the emotion and realness in this piece. Its a powerful piece and reminds me of family far away. Parker |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Is it not in those quiet hours when sleep has come for our tired soul that we get to love and spend time again with those who we had to let go? Daylight brings the hurt again, but in dreams as in memories those gone do live on. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Serenity .....Little sad  HUGS |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lay quiet in the lap of he, as when a child you did, remember love and used to be, the memories as a kid. Lay quietly in slumber, be well, in God confide, and smile upon the heavens where dad with friends does ride. Rick The pain will pass as the memories of his love unite, then giving you peace. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to thank you all very much...this seems to be the only place I have to talk about it. I appreciate the kindness and compassion so much. It's just hard, he was my rock. I miss him very much. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... this is good..and the pain that goes with the loss..the missing that you do...well it changes..but never goes away... hugs to you.. |
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