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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-28 07:33 PM

BEAMING

sunny ways to shine
sweet beams lifting laughter fine
tweak the smile in me

~*~

funny ways are mine
sounds emanating heartstrings
hear the smile in me

~*~

as sincere entwines
eyes crinkling in your divine
feel the smile of me

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-07-28 07:34 PM

Indeed, I felt your smile with these great senryus

As always, you express yourself so well with this Japanese form~

Melissa~

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

2 posted 2001-07-28 07:37 PM

I truly liked this piece...it has such a happy tone!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2001-07-28 07:43 PM

Dear Sunshine, I can feel the beam from your smile, this is a nice form of poetry.
Much enjoyed.

Rick

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-28 07:46 PM

Karilea~

Smile from face of sun
Spreads delight to everyone
Jumps to face of me

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

5 posted 2001-07-28 08:29 PM

Really nice poem! You set this up so that one almost can't help getting happy while reading it!

Shannon

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-07-28 08:46 PM

Very gentle smile, ahhh, it is good to see the Sunshine smiling and radiating happiness

Samia
Junior Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 47
Earth of corse!

7 posted 2001-07-29 01:14 AM

Hi Sunshine, I love it! I think honestly that you're one of the best poets I've ever seen.
-Samia

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-07-30 12:14 PM

{Smiling} Well done.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-07-30 01:47 PM

One of those eye crinkling smiles. The best kind. Enjoyed!

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2001-07-30 01:51 PM

yes...the smiling sun.. nicely done

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-07-30 04:00 PM

One of those "eye crinkling" smiles. The best kind.

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-07-30 04:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem Sunshine...James

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-07-30 04:15 PM

tweak....
hear
& feel
my smile.....

Oh.....You made me smile .....

I loved it....

Thank you
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