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Into the Pleasure
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Into the Pleasure |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Into the Pleasure If I were to identify the source of my happiness. I'd have to say a smile from you would be high upon my list. And as I proceeded to consider the origin of the source a kiss from your sweet lips would provide happiness of course. Then I would consider how perfectly you blend into my arms. Like a hot knife through butter I melt into the pleasure of your feminine charms. Jameslee@July28,2001 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ahhh... those feminine charms... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so sweetly and nicely said, JM, very enjoyable! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
James~ So sweetly sensual, I especially enjoyed the last verse and I love the image of "like a hot knife through butter I melt into the pleasure of your feminine charms" an awesome line! Melissa~ |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
What a romantic piece with a red hot ending...loved it! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Very nicely done. Like the romanticism. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, just melt James.  Great poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mark, Vas, Melissa, AZblond, Marge and walker for the nice responses...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes.. very nicely said... lovely write... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Great poem! ...into the pleasure of your feminine charms... Definitely high on the list. Melton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you are SUCH a sweet talker  |
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