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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-28 01:12 PM




NOJWAAN
A YOUNG MAN


Cund roose bad ik nojwaan tabba honey wala hey
A young man is about to desolate after some days
Kiun k chund roose bad uss ka biya ho ney wala hey
Because after some days he is about to marry

Rishta honey k chund roose guzar janey k bad
After some days after the engagement
Uss ki zindgi ka sub say bara hadhsa ho ney wala hey
The biggest accident of his life is about to happen

Shadi k char saal kush rahney k baad
After having four years of marriage
Buchoon ki ik aabadi ka zumadar ho ney wala hey
He is about to responsible of a population of some children's

Biwi buchoon ki hawshaat poora kartey kartey wo
While fulfilling the wishes of his wife and children's
Zindgi k unginat masael sey doo char honey wala hey
He is about to face lot of problems of life

Saas oor bahoo key jugroon main ulaj janey k baad
While entangled into the disputes of daugther_in_law (wife) and Mother_in_law (mother)
Wo iss zindgi sey beyzar ho ney wala hey
He is about to displeased from this life

bari family k akhrajat na ho ney ki wajey sey
While not having the expenses of a big family
Kuch he arssa main wo zindgi sey lachar ho ney wala hey
He is about to be helpless from this life after some time

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
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1 posted 2001-07-28 07:01 PM


Sad story, but love to see you write your native language.

Titia

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helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
Posts 240

2 posted 2001-07-28 07:37 PM


awww waseem       you must get on the right side of the motherin law....she    loves flowers too
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-07-29 02:19 AM


wasi----If this is true...Stop!  Do not pass go, do not collect $50.  You have too much happiness within you to write of sorrow.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-07-29 04:50 AM


Makes me think of my youngest son who recently got married and now his wife is pregnant and I'm thinking he's too young for all this to be happening...James
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