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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-28 10:22 AM



in rain’s
bow
after cloud’s
show
comes the
know
rain fall’s
life
held in
glisten
ease this
strife
as I
listen

hearing
color

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-07-28 10:26 AM


the sound of red. . . hmmmmmmmmm. . . I like it. . .

did you know that in music, they've been working with what sound a color makes??  or what note makes a color???  I'll have to tell you more. . . it's truly fascinating. . .

I love this. . . very well done, and wonderfully short. . . so much can be gleaned. . .  

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Martie
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2 posted 2001-07-28 10:41 AM


Sunshine--Sounds like a wonderful sound sooth!
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-07-28 12:39 PM


very original and thought provoking, fabulous thought here!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kathleen


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4 posted 2001-07-28 02:22 PM


And what can be more peaceful to the eyes and soul, then the promise of a rainbow...nice imagery this day...very gentle smile
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5 posted 2001-07-28 02:31 PM


Very cool...love the idea of hearing colors!
Constance
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6 posted 2001-07-28 02:47 PM


few words---lots of sweet images.


BloomingRose
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7 posted 2001-07-28 03:19 PM



As beautiful as a rainbow is to look at,
I can only imagine how breathtaking
the sound would be.
Lovely, lovely
this thought provoking poem.


Hugs,
Deb

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8 posted 2001-07-28 05:19 PM


Yes, I like the thought of the sound of color. Nice poem all around  
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-07-28 07:33 PM



What a clever thought, I really enjoyed this  

Melissa~

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