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Rick
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0 posted 2001-07-28 08:30 AM



Come sit with me upon this rock that overlooks the sea
Let’s talk about the heavens vast and how we came to be

Come hitch upon this ride of mine, that’s travelled youth and years
Come share with me a life fulfilled with wonders and of tears

Come walk within this forest where the elves and goblins’ run
Let’s share but moments, you and I, till night turns to the sun

Come revel in the beauties that God has given earth
Let’s sail upon those waters wide and find our call of worth

Come share but just a moment’s truth, between your heart and mine
Let’s share together but a touch, a kiss to last through time


© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-28 08:34 AM



In this bit of sharing, the brief moment lends me to believe that there will be some stories to come from all of this...

for every two lines read, I saw more...

so come, share soon....

Rick
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2 posted 2001-07-28 08:56 AM


Dear Sunshine, we are so lucky to have our minds and visions of love. We are so lucky to have our penned words read and then reacted on.
Thanks for your posting.

The romance in my mind will continue.

Rick

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3 posted 2001-07-28 02:22 PM


Rick~
What a lovely flow your thoughts conveyed.
Quite romantically tender.
~*Marge*~

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Martie
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4 posted 2001-07-28 05:36 PM


Rick--Ah, very romantic...with an old fashioned flaire that I like.
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5 posted 2001-07-28 06:27 PM


Rick, you made my heart sigh.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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6 posted 2001-07-28 07:02 PM


Rick,
  Such a romantic you are!  This is beautiful!
          Tanya

Dance like nobody is watching
Love like you've never been hurt

rwood
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7 posted 2001-07-28 10:27 PM


A true heartbeat of verse! I hope you have many such beautiful moments. Love smiles in this.

Sincerely,
Regina

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8 posted 2001-07-28 10:32 PM


Lovely, enjoyed,thanks.
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9 posted 2001-07-29 09:06 AM


A lovely cadence kissed sharing of anticipation, hope and dreams of love.
Wonderful writing, and thank you for sharing  
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

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10 posted 2001-07-29 10:40 AM


enjoy this much
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11 posted 2001-07-30 08:31 PM


Rick, this is very beautiful, the style, the flow, and the sentiment.
Sandra

Rick
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12 posted 2001-07-31 09:50 AM


Thank you everone for reading my work and replying with your wonderful words. It is much appreciated indeed and may you all find special moments of love.

Rick.

Nice to have a family of friends out there.

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