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Armegeddon
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Armegeddon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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within me glowing upon each side the numbers growing troups amassed behind the line of the "me" not yet defined... that grows in me THE BOMB-- a detonation's peace... the knowing that it is the end. May bodies fall in death, defend, enscripted No, I did not choose to wage a war where both sides lose... planting daisies in the sand with but my tears to water roots-- I pray that I will never shoot, I spy the fear of death in me. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And aren't we our own worst enemy, gentle one?...nicely said and read...very gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This touched me in a place I thought was dead...God bless you " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Unlikely soldier, that I am planting daisies in the sand with but my tears to water roots-- I pray that I will never shoot, for in the eyes of enemy, I spy the fear of death in me. =================================== sometimes we are backed into corners where we have to fight to define who we are once we figure out who and what that is... Im thinking it will be...take no prisoners... kicking butt and taking names... Im betting on you me twin... your a survivor... AND? one HELL of a poet.  meslow burn ... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Must be the phases of the moon...or something that's in the coffee baby...I feel a war coming on myself...lol don't these people know who they are messin with  Love ya sweets...take care of you~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Take a step back...go for a long walk...clear you mind...then decide what to do. Trust in your instincts. And take care of YOU. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the inner war that we all must deal with, sometimes daily. . . who wins?? some would say that the strongest wins. . . but there are times where I'm not so sure. . . I loved the flow and the images in this one, particulary "THE BOMB", which gives importance to the one thing that is there for all of us. . . the one thing that "blows up" our lives. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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