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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-07-27 10:40 PM

Luna shines there, so high above
in the brilliance of night time skies,
I am held there, within a trance
No, I can not divert my eyes.
I see the mists of yesterday
blow past in the gentle breeze,
and I'm lost in this sullen sadness
yet Luna helps my pain to ease.
I hear the whispers on the wind
as the great spirits help to guide,
and up in those starry heavens
I am sure that angels do reside.
This night, it surely has been blessed
with cool freshness of air to breathe,
and mesmerized, I sit and stare
or does Luna attempt to deceive?
Somewhere out there in the distance
as Luna illuminates the evening skies,
mother nature sings her lonely song
as tears fall steadily from my eyes.
In the magic of this quiet moment
with Luna dressed in all her majesty,
the stars, they dance across the skies
and I am filled with peace~ and tranquility.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-28 12:56 PM

I know you're speaking of the moon and this was lovely for that, but I, myself, couldn't help thinking of the lovely, green luna moth. Have you seen it? It's so gorgeous.

Now back to your poem, lovely descriptive lines with peace conveyed marvelously.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-07-28 08:13 AM

In the magic of this quiet moment
with Luna dressed in all her majesty,
the stars, they dance across the skies
and I am filled with peace~ and tranquility.
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This beautiful tender poem is perfect for summer nights.
Love your gentle style of writing.

Hugs,
Deb

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-07-28 09:27 AM

I hear the whispers on the wind
as the great spirits help to guide,
and up in those starry heavens
I am sure that angels do reside.
This night, it surely has been blessed
with cool freshness of air to breathe,
and mesmerized, I sit and stare.
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You live up to your name with this beauty...
wonderful imagery GS
your poem brings the reader the same peace you found in this night

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-28 01:41 PM

GentleSpirit~
Soft, lovely and alluring ...

'In the magic of this quiet moment
with Luna dressed in all her majesty,
the stars, they dance across the skies
and I am filled with peace~ and tranquility.'

Anything 'moon' touches me~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-28 08:50 PM

this is just wonderful D. . .

flowing and moving just like the stars in a nighttime sky. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-07-29 02:51 PM

Just a quick pop in to say thanks to all. I appreciate all the kind words, and wish I had more to offer right now, but my muse refuses to co-operate right now. Thanks all and hugs to you all.
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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