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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Creating once with fluid pen, My muse... running free. But now that flowing waterfall, Seems lost... Inside of me. My pen... Silent though heartfelt tried, All hope of comfort lost. Frustration... at the words I see, Illusion is the cost? I’m trapped... inside a muted muse, No way to struggle free. Tell me! Tell me, tell me now, Is this how its to be? [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
My pen... Silent though heartfelt tried, All hope of comfort lost. Wish I couldn't write like this! Enjoyed. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I’m trapped... inside a muted muse, No way to struggle free. ================= Oh.....there will be a way.....Your lines prove just too clearly that your muse is just fine...... It is always wonderful when a writer seems to think his muse is silent and end up writing a good piece.......  and to your muse as well....Thank you...... *********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I would say the muse you seek did from under basket peek when pen in hand this verse was born and words from psyche torn It is the curse of all who write I think... to ask this question from time to time... this verse however... was nicely done and one I think many can relate to... so... I think you successful..in finding voice |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marilyn, this is great, your pen seems to be working quite well  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no, it's not how it is to be. . . you will get through it. . . I know that you will. . . while words still come, there's always hope. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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