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Human Carnival
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Human Carnival |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Human Carnival A carnivals flowing frivol Flows within like moving shadows A snivel full of rank and drivel Dancing upon a stage of woes. Ever acting the dramas part Of hunter searcher finding love Beyond the veil of every heart In chambers of heaven above Heavy handed in the process Often leaving some stains of red And rarely cleans the messy mess And rarely changes the bedspread. Yet it downs throughout the ages Sent to us on the wings of cast Written up in different stages And flown to us from out the past. It is a carnival of goals The phantoms of our searching souls |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
The show must go on. I guess... you bring to word things of the spirit very well. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bring on the clowns, then, for I have a feeling this is not all there is.... Well done, our Sy! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beyond the veil of every heart In chambers of heaven above Heavy handed in the process Often leaving some stains of red ==================================== Yet it downs throughout the ages Sent to us on the wings of cast Written up in different stages And flown to us from out the past. It is a carnival of goals The phantoms of our searching souls ================================= You went deep for this one Stinky.. my goodness..me thinks Randys raging in a slow burn... what an intense,vivid, write... superb imagery and rhyme divine. I concur with Sun, there is much more to come... me thinks youre just warming up ...I'll bring the marshmallows  very cool poem Sy-babes *ww*   me |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Ever acting the dramas part Of hunter searcher finding love Beyond the veil of every heart In chambers of heaven above... I like this so much. Spoke to me. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Send in the clowns!! So at least we can see why they trip on their big feet..and don't have to ponder why we do... Nicely written Seymour... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wawpoet, You are right the show must go on. Sunshine, Don't have to bring them on, they are here. *L* JM, I went so deep I almost came out the other side. Marshmallows are fine and you can bring some raspberry tea to wash them down. Love Ya R&S JLR, Glad you liked, thanks Cpat hair, Thank you for the nicely. |
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