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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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Sinking The pain is too deep I feel my heart breaking Sinking in the depth of torment Where do I go? I long for the voice That caresses my heart The flavor of desire equal to no other The warm glow of laughter And a smile so bright The eyes that see all of me And love me anyway I yearn for it Tears fill my eyes Wishing for the desire again... Cpalmer July 11, 2001 God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"The eyes that see all of me And love me anyway" My favourite lines! enjoyed. Maree |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Maree, Thank you  Cindi |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Longing is a craggy precipice from whose view is distant lonely, Love a fertile valley where everyone wishes to be. It's an arduous hike not a wistful flying leap which will take us from one to the other. Try and enjoy the changing view along the path. Thoughtful write. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
RS I like your perspective on this....think of it more as a journey I am taking to acheive the ultimate love...the love of christ Thanks for reading Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cindi- You've expressed the emotions well, and the desire WILL come again.. Nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
This is full of feeling well written and well expressed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Simply beautiful, thanks for this one. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, All I can say it 'thank you'! Love ya lots Cindi Shadow Thanks for reading and commenting...I appreciate it Cindi Walker Thank you for reading and your welcome! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Excellent poem, written with a lot of feeling and makes me feel a lot of things reading it. |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Kirster I am glad you like it! The feelings were really flowing on this one! lyl Cindi |
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