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Moonlight And Lace |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Moonlight And Lace ~*~ Moonlight and lace glowing in a haze of wonder draping the night with mysterious innocence stars falling in love shower with pulsing thunder as love blooms in the light of passions moon Basking in the warmth of breathless adoration loneliness scatters in the tranquillity of ease silver starlight’s burst in magical whispering a calm surrender bids us to stay Heat of a rolling wind melts reluctant wishes moments are cherished as a final sweet pain a chance in the palm of tomorrow’s dream freedom found in yesterdays scheme Treasures blossom in fields of sunrise hope rain becomes gentle at the very thought of you covered in unforgettable webs of moonlight lace wrapped in this forever heavenly place ~*~ BloomingRose |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- This is such a lovely write.  Very nicely done.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky~ Thank you. I had to drag my muse out of an unconscience state of mind to write this. It wasn't easy. I prefer watermelon and spittin seeds.  *Hugs* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Deb..and a very nice muse she is ha...  ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
While I enjoyed this very much, I am looking towards your watermelon, seed-spitting poem. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Victoria~ Thank you. Guess she has been the recluse hiding under my bed, popping into my dreams.  Decaflame~ Thanks much. Spittin watermelon seeds is much more fun!  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lovely and whimsical  Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Oh ... how lovely ! 'rain becomes gentle at the very thought of you' This line is simply stunningly elegant. Nicely done, poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
woven just like the things that you speak of. . . wow. . . great job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Melissa~ Thank you. Marge~ Thank you sweet friend. *hugs* btw, I don't believe I have had the pleasure of being called poetess. I think I like  Sven~ Thank you so much. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh ....... now THIS is poetry and hey, you even loaded it with wonderful imagery. Very well written and very inspiring. The title was perfect, the flow excellent, and the images bring a smile to my that I am sure will last the night. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Coming from one as gifted as you... this is a real compliment. Thanks my friend. Great to see you here! Deb |
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