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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Dreamscape   Lady luna illuminates wishes with her brush cascading satin twilight of sleep's tranquil hush paradise of heartbeats in magical realm are born heated by yearning of mystic moon's adorn in fragrant place where desire and reality are one an Eden of ecstasy where night makes love to sun sands of amaretto passion pause mortal time enraptured lips savour fate's ambrosia wine intoxicated imagination...embracing destiny I swim your seductive stare of chocolate mahogany a willing prisoner of pre-scripted love reprise waltzing on waves of innocence in deep exotic eyes draped in shower sprinkles of thunderous mystery as rolling winds of wonder whisper splendor symphony entwined strums of skin leap with amber leaves in tune with butterfly ballet on piano breeze blush of sighs trace ebony and ivory keys of sky resonating on wisp of wing on bejeweled firefly awash over dreamscape of kismet fantasies basking in silken folds of angelic melodies sailing on the nectar flowing through our veins on waterfalls of romance in dewdrops of champagne this true bond is the enchanted taste of elation - a gem of treasures found in celestial constellation freedom is held in this heavenly rush of grace enwrapped in delicate dazzle of starlight lace dancing to love on kisses in eternal euphony soulmate of slumber, you are my greatest harmony By Melissa P. Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Melissa, this is really very beautiful and enchanting  My favourite line...... I swim your seductive stare of chocolate mahogany Maree |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Beautiful flow Beautiful poem simply beautiful! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Maree and Voiceless, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this dream of mine |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy this blows me away just wow! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ When your romanticism takes flight ... there is no equaling the beauty of your thoughts~ 'in tune with butterfly ballet on piano breeze blush of sighs trace ebony and ivory keys of sky resonating on wisp of wing on bejeweled firefly awash over dreamscape of kismet fantasies' Most elegant, dear poetess~ My favorite 'kind' of writing from you~ You do this sooooooooooooooo well~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Now this I like very much Melissa. . . the quality of your Romantic writing is just amazing. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am so glad to see this Melissa. It is indeed a beautiful poem and your words flow effortlessly with eloquence and style that captivates the reader and holds them in the spell of wonder. I do indeed enjoy this, and will tuck it into my lil ole' box of treasures. Thank you so much..and hugs. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Exstreamly beautiful and very romantic. Do you write books, I would like to know. All of the women I know love love stories. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very beautiful, very romantic and very well done. Joyce |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is exquisite in every way. The imagery... the beautiful words. All I can say is, WOW girl!  Hugs, Deb |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, I like this too. (I have stared at linoleum, by the way.) Very good. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Melissa, Ohhhhhhhh I am so glad I did NOT miss this new poem of yours. WOW! Breath taking...once again! I too love the lines mentioned by the readers who posted comments before me, but here are some more that especially spoke to my heart. "in fragant place where desire and reality are one" Ohhh so true, the sense of smell is very much a part of a romantic experience. I also loved the references to adult beverages throughout the poem: "ambrosia wine" "dewdrops of champagne" and my very favorite one - "ameretto passion." The drink, Ameretto, does indeed go well with the "taste of elation." Still smiling and thinking about this delightful read! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Melissa This was a truly outstanding piece of writing. I was mesmerised by the pictures you painted from your palette of creative words. Thank you so much. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wow, that is some dream!  Loved the images and use of descriptors...very well done! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hedonistically epicurean senusality. Grrrrrrowl... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
WOW! This is so Good! Did I say WOW! Dennis |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I second the previous WOW! This was the tastiest love poem I have read in some time. Your images are wonderful. I want to place myself directly in the middle of that dreamscape. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay......so when did you become so prolific in your romance poems? Have I been gone that long? This was beautifully written and composed and holds all the attributes in poetry that I so adore. Imagery is outstanding (Fantasmagical actually), the flow is superb and of course the romance flawless. I applaud you with much enthusiasm. |
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