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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-26 09:18 PM


I am You

there are several times
of awakening
in a life still
quakening

in gentle
or harsh
rediscovering
of life gone
by, this
recovering

some things we bless
by the moment
others we bless
by their torment
that it is gone
but it comes back
again
sometimes we know
that sometimes,
we bend

it is this, this moment
here, and now
that I must take a
breath, and how
much it hurts, this
pain, so deep
but first I must,
before I sleep

know

know that in this here
and now,

that people come, and
some,

somehow,

Feel

and in their feel,
translate,

a moment’s qualm

in warmth, equate

the feel,

the hurt

the deep

transpires

and before the fall
in this deep quagmire

they will come to
know of them,

their

self

and dust their
memories
off that shelf

and bring themselves
to the forefront
and clear!

as their stoic
memories
share!

for their way
is
all
in
here

where I
am you,
and understand


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-07-26 09:23 PM


and in the being, there is found happiness. . .

such a wonderful and uniquely spiritual quality to this. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-07-26 09:35 PM


There is a time that comes, when all becomes clear. of the WHY...very nicely done, Sissie..very gentle smile
Balladeer
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3 posted 2001-07-26 09:42 PM


It gets no more delicate than this, Sunshine....
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