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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-07-26 03:40 PM



I've been there
many times
To where love has no name
Where my heart can't hurt again
Where my love stands alone
without fears or hopes
But then I miss the raindrops
on this thirsty soil
But then I miss the sun
on these vast skies
And it's then that I return
forgiving
forgetting
wanting
hoping
to begin again.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 07-26-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-07-26 04:05 PM


Round and round it goes...the choices are ours.  Liked this a lot, walker.
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-07-26 04:42 PM


yes... to begin again...

nicely done... summed up in poetic style the cycle I think we or most of us can relate to

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
3 posted 2001-07-26 05:10 PM


So true!  seems to just go around and around again....just as long as we begin again...Thank you I needed this today
Cindi

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2001-07-31 08:52 PM



walker-
   There is much truth in these words.
   Nicely done.

   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



vandana
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5 posted 2001-08-01 10:27 AM


enjoy
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