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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2001-07-26 03:14 PM


to be desired
what a lovely feel
somewhere in my past
could it have been real
why does time try to say, vehemently,
it was no big deal?

© July 26, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-26 03:19 PM


you leave me at a loss for words.....
( in a good way )  

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2 posted 2001-07-26 03:37 PM


ah yes..time does try and cloud our eyes...

nicely penned VAS...

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3 posted 2001-07-26 03:45 PM


But it was a big deal!
Just programmed not to last, I fear.
Anyway, nicely pondered piece, VAS.
      

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4 posted 2001-07-26 04:46 PM


Yes, Virgina, great expression of this feeling. I wish it didn't feel this way to me too, but it does.
Sandra

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