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Corinne
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0 posted 2001-07-26 03:08 PM


The Missing...

Something’s lacking here,
among the verses formed
from many hands joined
all connected by one muse.

A touch of the dream world is missing,
so dissimilar from the rest,
words that conjure spirits
lost in golden dimensions
of moors and rocky climes,
with fairies of emerald eyes.

Colors seem a bit dull
without this painter’s eye
a poet’s been gone too long,
held by the borealis,
mists of northern skies.

© 2001 Corinne Bailey

Come on back, Parker!

[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 07-26-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-26 03:14 PM


you know he is missed   this is a beautiful call to our missing poet.....let's hope he hears  
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2 posted 2001-07-26 03:24 PM



Passionate readers will be many, considering your fine play on words....

and a welcome tribute to a poet who is MIA...

come home, Parker!

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3 posted 2001-07-26 04:22 PM


Indeed...
hey P-man..come hang the moon and make us swoon  
Im in sonnet withdrawl.
lovely poetic tribute and invitation Corinne, how could he resist.

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4 posted 2001-07-26 04:45 PM


Nice Corrine, I hope he is back soon also.
Sandra

Corinne
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5 posted 2001-07-26 05:59 PM


Thank you, SEA, Lady in White, JM and Sandra!

Corinne

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6 posted 2001-07-26 09:26 PM


indeed, how could anyone say "No"?

wonderful word play here Corinne. . .  

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7 posted 2001-07-26 09:31 PM


very nice plea to a friend...very well done, Cor...very gentle smile
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8 posted 2001-07-27 10:36 AM


Well you are so sweet to write this.  

And thanks to the poets that replied.  

I do come in and peek every so often, but the words don't seem to be forming.  

Maybe I should keep that promise and recite my poem Lace...

Thank you for this sweet write also, sweet poet.

parker

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9 posted 2001-07-27 10:52 AM


Parker....PLEASE?!!   I'd love to hear you whisper it to me softly.......  
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10 posted 2001-07-27 12:25 PM


Thank you so much, Sven!

Logan, thanks, hon!

Park,

So glad to see you respond. This place isn't the same without your work! Yes, do recite "Lace."

Yes, SEA!

Cor

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