Open Poetry #15 |
An Ache For More............. |
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hear your voice whispering to me while I sleep telling me things I’ve never heard before words of love and longing desire and passion released in my dreams ……as you whisper…….. I feel your breath on my skin warm and inviting exciting…….. gilding sliding over me…… offering me a momentary feel of you waking me with an ache for more……. ~SEA~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You do these so very, very well... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I agree.. you do these very well... quite the image it conjours up...and the feel clings...like rain to you.. very nice indeed... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea you get all the lovin...James |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
brings back memories that are hard to touch well done, surely |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lady~ thank you very much! Ron~ ohh, I do like that thank you James~ yes, but I share VAS~ thank you ~SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
whew ... steamy and dreamy ... I hope your hubby takes Mega Man vitamins its gonna be a long hot summer on your sea shore |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I see a new Sea on the shore this summer Nice write. Sandra |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Momentary is better than nothing. Wonderful as always SEA. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Sea this is fantastic I had to re-read it twice before coming here to reply and I bet ya I'll wanna read it another time... Yup yup me likes this poem a whole lot Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Precious desire in each word, Lovely! Willie |
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