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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-07-26 03:03 PM



I hear your voice
whispering to me while I sleep
telling me things
I’ve never heard before
words of love and longing
desire and passion
released in my dreams
……as you whisper……..
I feel your breath on my skin
warm and inviting
exciting……..
gilding
sliding over me……
offering me
a momentary feel of you
waking me
with an ache
for  more…….


~SEA~


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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-26 03:04 PM



You do these so very, very well...

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2 posted 2001-07-26 03:09 PM


I agree.. you do these very well...

quite the image it conjours up...and the feel clings...like rain to you..

very nice indeed...

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-07-26 03:10 PM


Sea you get all the lovin...James
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4 posted 2001-07-26 03:11 PM


brings back memories that are hard to touch

well done, surely


SEA
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5 posted 2001-07-26 03:28 PM


Lady~ thank you very much!  

Ron~ ohh, I do like that   thank you  

James~ yes, but I share  

VAS~ thank you  

~SEA

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-07-26 04:28 PM


whew ... steamy and dreamy ...
I hope your hubby takes Mega Man vitamins
its gonna be a long hot summer on your sea shore  

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-07-26 04:41 PM


Yes, I see a new Sea on the shore this summer  
Nice write.
Sandra

PoeticKnight
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8 posted 2001-07-26 04:42 PM


Momentary is better than nothing.

Wonderful as always SEA.

CocoBaci
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9 posted 2001-08-14 03:23 AM


Oh Sea this is fantastic I had to re-read it twice before coming here to reply and I bet ya I'll wanna read it another time...

Yup yup me likes this poem a whole lot  
Hugs2uAlwaysPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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10 posted 2001-08-14 06:17 AM



Precious desire in each word, Lovely!

Willie

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