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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-07-26 12:05 PM


High-performance
Decisions

Encapsulated
On
A

Micro-chip mind


Restraints

Releasing
Through
A world

Between

Enveloping knowledge
And
Cybertech dreams


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-26 12:09 PM



Is this what it means when someone says "too much information"?

Well done Sir!

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2 posted 2001-07-26 12:13 PM


ah.. nice work Mark! like this form and the way the words fit...

I enjoyed!

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2001-07-26 01:39 PM


My Lady:  Rather, "not enough knowledge"...

Ron, I'm especially enjoying the multi-facetedness of this form -- just when I think "I know what it means", I find another angle of interpretation...  Thanks for the support.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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4 posted 2001-07-26 06:31 PM


True, Einstien said we could all be as brilliant as the other if we would utilize  more than the micro level of our brains. So we invent the micro-chip to do the work for us! Except mine seems to have my personality, It crashes alot, freezes up, and loses info on a daily basis! The information highway has curves! You are great at this form.
Sincerely,
Rwood

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-07-26 06:54 PM


Regina:  (...get a Mac) ;->  Thanks for the comments.  I've always wondered:  who was it that claimed that people "only use 10% of their brain"?  Assuming that it was a person, how would he/she know, anyway, if by default they are in the same category, by definition, as those commented upon? (Of course, maybe it WAS Einstein who first brought forth this theory;  even then -- how exactly could he test it??)  I am having fun with this form -- glad you're enjoying it too...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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6 posted 2001-07-26 07:04 PM


Interesting. Yep, I need a mac..
This always leaves me wondering what I may have missed.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-07-26 08:02 PM


Sandra, by virtue of not being God, we're always missing something, but if we can do our best to "keep up" with what matters to us and truly cherish and appreciate the moments as they happen, then, I believe, we are on the "right path"...

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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