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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-07-26 11:10 AM




summer’s green

summer’s green
plumps
the grape
to a lush
fullness of juices
awaiting

to satisfy

from childhood I
have nibbled at the top
of the green plump,
carefully peeling
the skin from
the body

before taking it
all in

so as thoughts of you
traipse across
my heart
I wonder

what you would do
if I wore

summer’s green for
you



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1 posted 2001-07-26 11:11 AM


hmmm.. sounds like a bit of seductive thought here... nice work..


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2 posted 2001-07-26 02:40 PM


this made me giggle aloud here in the quiet of my home

seductive indeed  

reminds me of a question that went around in the 70's..."If I told you you had a beautiful body, would you hold it against me?"

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3 posted 2001-07-27 03:03 PM


Very nice work here, Lady.  Sensual for sure and done so well.  Loved it!

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Miranda
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4 posted 2001-07-27 04:34 PM


I found this to be a fun playful piece to read, guess that is part of the allure... Thanks for sharing it.
                Miranda

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5 posted 2001-07-28 10:47 PM



Lady In White-
   I like it...LOTS!  
   Fun...with a hint of seduction.
   Nicely done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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