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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
They were my signs not yours marking roads traveled just in case symbols painted at the fork of twists & turns I'd rather side step this time on life's unsteady roads, reminders... It isn't about you or anyone else for this stage is mine the setting, lights the mood... I'm still discovering uncovering, analyzing introspecting, compromising, learning, teaching apologizing, beseeching, loving, caring and in the end daring... to be me is that so hard to see? ~Tier 7/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
excellent write RT... lots of wisdom in the path you describe... good to see you around.. I always enjoy your words |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderful piece, especially like this line: life's unsteady roads, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Captain, I appreciate your reading and commenting. *smiles* Thank you, VAS, always a treat when I see your comment at the end of one of my poems! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no, it's not hard to see. . . it's so wonderful that you're learning to be you. . . just remember that at the end of the path is the dream. . .  always wonderful to see your work my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
It isn't about you or anyone else for this stage is mine the setting, lights the mood... Tier---Great write! I like the style you use. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Tiersdin. I like this. I like the way you have developed it. And the attitude? Just right. Well done. \\ |
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