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Hear the Wind
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Hear the Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Hear the Wind Winds in the seashell that I hear Play whimsy on my inner ear. Pluck the strings of yesterday Under the rings of passage way I hear the slight of time flow by Bringing sight to my inner eye. Each grain of sand is weighted so To rain some musing that I know Lighting me with a fancies flair Living there on yesterday’s air. Brightening up my dark of blind Accessing the dark of my mind. It is a novel grace of twist A lever to a place of gist Perhaps it is a fairy tale But one that gives me scale and sail. They’re always there upon the beach Always they’re for a hand to reach. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice work Seymour.. I enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I see you finally made it to the beach THis is a lovely poem Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lighting me with a fancies flair Living there on yesterday’s air. Brightening up my dark of blind Accessing the dark of my mind. It is a novel grace of twist A lever to a place of gist Perhaps it is a fairy tale But one that gives me scale and sail. =============================== Gifts from the oceans floor washed up in a waves swell Treasures to find, whispered secrets to tell A fantasies dream born in a mystic winds shell Listen with your heart, you'll hear the promises of Tinkerbell  *L**winkiewinkie*  me Lookie what I found... Butterfly and Dragonfly shells Now how cool is that *L*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat hair, Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Elizabeth, Yes, but alone I'm afaid, thank you. Sy JM, I always listen to tinkerbell. Beautiful rhyming response. Love Sy |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
methinks me see's Randy's wings a bobbles toy, a piece of string a little song, a glass of wine I will play this again in rewind... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Beautiful retort, thank you. *L* |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
for me. all the shells I've listened to play whale songs. how soothing to my soul. I need to get back to the beach |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wpwpoet, It's a good place to visit, thank you |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I hear the slight of time flow by Bringing sight to my inner eye. Each grain of sand is weighted so To rain some musing that I know ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To rain some musing that I know... listning, reaching, finding. This is what I hear. Good poem. Deb |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Enjoyed your poem, nice work. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images seymour...i use to love to listen to the sea shells whisper..havent dont that in a long time..not to many in Texas ha...  ~Victoria~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice MY favorite stanza is the first  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You have some fantastic images here, Sy, I just love the way you write. It's a keeper. Oh to posess that randy dragon of yours, my muse is not doing so well lately Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Deb, Thank you much. Shadow, Nice comment. Victoria, Did you hear the ocean? VAS, Mine too. Thanks Melissa, Feed him some chili peppers. LOL |
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