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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-07-25 07:58 PM



Did you ever feel
how my heart beats
when your skin touches mine
unknowingly
Have you ever seen my tears
when I agonize with love
blindly
Did you ever notice
how happy I am when you're close to me
unconsciously
Have you ever been aware
how much I desire you
totally


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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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1 posted 2001-07-25 08:21 PM


Did she????

Lovely poem Walker

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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
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2 posted 2001-07-25 10:40 PM


Woo Hoo, walker, very nice poem. I really love this. I have been reading your poetry and I like everything you write! Much talent, my friend.  

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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3 posted 2001-07-26 12:46 PM


Sometimes every word relates perfectly an image, emotion...this is one of those times.  Good one, walker!
cpalmer
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Phoenix, Az
4 posted 2001-07-26 01:28 AM


Wow,
So did she? I would after a writing like that! powerful!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-07-27 11:37 AM


Inquiring minds want to know ... does she?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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6 posted 2001-07-27 11:44 AM



Walker, this is very, very good...

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