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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-07-25 07:34 PM

Horizons view
Mother Earth,
land of heritage
land of birth.

Skies above,
blue as seas,
gentle winds,
blowing trees.

Splashing waves,
upon the shore,
tranquil sounds,
a healing cure.

Mountains rising
over head,
a dreamscape,
to where I'm lead.

Wisping clouds,
spread in skies,
high above,
the eagle flies.

From dust is born,
this place of peace,
in natures view,
I find release.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-07-25 07:57 PM

Very beautifully done, Gentle Spirit! I enjoyed this very much!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-07-25 08:00 PM

Thank you very much Denise. It was a wonderful day out on the lake, and I even got to see an eagle flying that day!! It was just so inspiring. Thanks!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

3 posted 2001-07-26 06:37 PM

Oh God that is so amazing, I absolutly adore that poem, that is simply the most beutiful, well written, meaningful poem I have read in mounths, the way you have captured that feeling of how beutiful and peaceful it can be to gaze in to nature and the world around us . And such nice short sharp lines and rhymes aswell - brilliant .
Thankyou so very much .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-07-26 07:30 PM

Tommy, thank you for such an enthusiastic
reply to this. THIS MADE ME SMILE!! Thank you and hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

5 posted 2001-07-26 10:07 PM

I enjoyed this. The cadence was wonderful, the subject matter one of my favorites. To see the mountains, the eagles. What a joy that must have been! *s*

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

6 posted 2001-07-27 04:44 PM

muhahahh, i remember u writing this one!! haha i watched u do it!

muhahaha

fall hard, practice harder not to fall
Don't belong, Don't exist, Don't give a S***, Don't ever judge me -Slipknot
death is certain, life is not
s

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-07-27 07:47 PM

Oh, how I relate to this...beautiful images, GS...truly wonderful write!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2001-07-27 08:09 PM

Well, you knew I couldn't resist a nature poem didn't you? This was a beautiful read and just from the feeling behind the words I can tell that you truely enjoyed this day. I loved the flow in this piece but more than that, I truely loved the excellent images and sereneness that was conveyed to the reader. Well done. Now how about more nature poems from you. Yeah, so I am a little greedy, but hey ........ life is short.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-07-27 08:28 PM

SE, I thank you, and when can we expect more from YOU!!  Miss your words.  *s*

Ok neice of mine, yes you were there, and YES it was an inspiration.  Seeing the eagle
was just AWESOME!!

sp, I thank you.  I'm amazed at the replies I have seen here.  *s*

Well Mr. Mark.......I indeed posted something at your request, and do appreciate
your kind comments very much.  The day was a much needed get a way and was indeed
beautiful......one of those kind of days that helps to heal the soul and help one look inside.
Life is short, so I guess it is ok if your being greedy for once!!  Thank you.....:}

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-07-27 09:25 PM

I see your "Gentle Spirit" in every word. Nature agrees with you! Beautiful.
Sincerely,
Regina

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

11 posted 2001-07-27 09:38 PM

Nicely written piece. Nature holds so many joy's and can be very inspring.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-07-28 03:49 AM

GentleSpirit~
What gentle serenity and beauty you've conveyed.
Greatly enjoyable.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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