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walker
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0 posted 2001-07-25 07:23 PM



The night never looked so fine
candlelight
wine
summer breeze
by the pool
you and I
alone
kissing
passionately
Looking
at the stars
love promises
in a hammock
together
cuddling
so tight.


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with you
1 posted 2001-07-25 07:36 PM


YES!!   The title got me in....I had a night like this once.....such fun..... I liked this very much  
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2 posted 2001-07-25 07:46 PM


walker. . . you've been reading my mind haven't you???

I love the short scenes that you can show with just a word. . . wonderful. . .

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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-07-25 08:41 PM


Yes, the title grabbed me too. I guess if you've had one of these nights, you never forget  
Nicely expressed.
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-07-25 10:44 PM


Woo hoo once again, walker! Love it

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