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0 posted 2001-07-25 05:42 PM



Closer.....
listen baby,
to what I ask of you
my need is direct and honest
my want is pure and uncomplicated
only you can soothe this aching
can you hear my whispers
listen baby,
.....closer

~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-07-25 05:44 PM


Although this is very beautiful and full of emotion.... I regret to inform you I must send you back into rehab...  tsk tsk,, just when I thought you were doing so well too...heh  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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2 posted 2001-07-25 05:46 PM


Jamie.....the urges are just too powerful and I, too weak to resist   LOL I can't help myself!!  
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3 posted 2001-07-25 05:48 PM



Sometimes the repartee is just as enjoyable as the poem itself....

well done SEA!

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4 posted 2001-07-25 06:15 PM


such a lovely whisper from a heart of love


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5 posted 2001-07-25 06:46 PM


Even the deaf could hear that plea in the middle of the NYSE at it's peak.  You know I enjoyed.
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6 posted 2001-07-25 06:51 PM


LIW~ yes,   it is   thanks

VAS~ sweet   thank you

Mark~ hey cowboy.....you know you have been missed right?! sooooooo nice to see you around   and what is NYSE? when do I get to *sigh* again??????  


~SEA

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7 posted 2001-07-25 06:52 PM


ok, New York Stock Exchange.....yes, I'm slow...hee hee  
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8 posted 2001-07-25 06:55 PM


If he can't hear your whisper then go ahead and SHOUT! Enjoyed!
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9 posted 2001-07-25 06:58 PM


Inot2B~ LOL belive me, when he doesn't hear me, I do   thanks  
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10 posted 2001-08-30 07:17 PM


enjoy
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