winter memory senryus - a repost

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Open Poetry #15

winter memory senryus - a repost

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 04:27 PM

~*~

Swirling emotions
Captured in filigree lace
Bury deep my thoughts

~*~

To be white again
Has one ever seen warm snow
Cover me with love

~*~

Blizzard me away
To our nest beneath the quilts
Love me all this day

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2001-07-25 04:54 PM

Bury deep
Cover me
Love me

Very good!

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 07-25-2001).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-07-25 05:21 PM

Silent pines, skis hiss
Furnace breathing plumes of steam
Snow angels in love

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-07-25 07:55 PM

I love these, very well written

Melissa~

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

4 posted 2001-07-25 08:59 PM

Ummmmmm...these invoke such wonderful images of winter white, and warm fire glows...nicely done!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-26 11:36 PM

Lady In White-

yes i've seen warm snow
melts before it hits the ground
that's Phoenix for you

LOL..sorry, couldn't help myself.

I honestly do love these wonderful
senryus of yours...reminds me how
ready I am for summer to be over!

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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