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Regrets of Love
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Regrets of Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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She does not fall easily in love and discovers someone hiding in her soul someone lurking in the shadows waiting for love to take its toll long stem roses are a fantasy and cozy dinners with a finger bowl Love like gravity falls slowly apart this man had only lust in his heart Does she regret not passing him by? like a dark cloud in the sky Sweet words broke down barriers wanton love and caged desires He had that special something those qualities she adored the whisper of his voice held the key to her bedroom door Her heart sang like a baby grand Just the thought of a rose in his hand. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This is very nice. I enjoyed reading it. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh the wooing of roses and sweet words does she regret? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Jamie..thank you so much for taking time to read..appreciate your comments.  Virginia...well sometimes a rose would be nice ha..regrets...hmmmm....  thanks Virginia~Victoria~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, no one speaks like you do. . . this is just excellent. . . a wonderful memory. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
No, never regrets, hon, not for loving someone. I feel this poem, in so many ways. Sandra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this one, fantastic poem I am sure many can relate to, I know I could! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed Victoria...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"Sweet words broke down barriers wanton love and caged desires He had that special something those qualities she adored the whisper of his voice held the key to her bedroom door" boy, boy oh boy, what lines, Victoria, you are beautiful and I love that new picture! and NO she probably doesn't regret passing him by.......not one bit. [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sven ..always nice to hear your inspirational comments.. Sandra..thank you..i didnt think you would regret..lets toss a coin haa...hugs Mysteria..yes i guess we all have been there once in our lives..thanks for peeking in hugs james..hope all is well with you..thank you for visiting.. kathleen..thank you the pic was taken on mothers day..actually i was with my niece, she is cut out of the pic haa..pic was too small for her to be in it too..haa...Glad you enjoyed hugs.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think you answered your own question. I really enjoyed this piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
victoria i really do like the last two lines, very nice [This message has been edited by Chelsea~ (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sometimes one cannot control their thoughts, wouldnt it be nice if we could..but than again..daydreaming is nice sometimes too. Thank you interloper Thank you Chelsea..glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in. ~Victoria~ [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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