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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 03:40 PM

Encompassing

in a perfect world
a utopia, comprised
of a little mystery
a little surprise
I would also include
God, and fate
and all my whys
would then relate

magic and miracles
in sweet surround
would tether me
like a balloon
encompassing
all around

some sleight of hand
lifting weighty demands
a smile’s surprise
behind loved one’s eyes
and before you think
my mind’s done blinked
yes I know still here
would be great loss
and some real fear

for we cannot have
a true romance
even in a utopian
dance
that something doesn’t
comprise
the swell of tear
to our eyes

but I would align
magic and fate
to God and miracles
in my equate
so that, upon my whim
I could send you
the greatest grins

so that I might
encompass your
sweet bliss
with something more
than love’s
light kiss

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-25 03:42 PM

yes.. I like the play of sound and words on ear in this...and the wisdom..as well as the wishes..
nicely penned...

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2001-07-25 03:43 PM

Or even in a near perfect world....

Very nice poem

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-07-25 05:31 PM

Oh I liked this part:
but I would align
magic and fate
to God and miracles
in my equate
so that, upon my whim
I could send you
the greatest grins

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-07-26 02:18 PM

Sounds like this world to me... (given the "right" frame-of-mind...)

Flowing and intriguing, my Lady.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-31 09:12 PM

Lady In White-
   I like the sound of this.
   Much enjoyed.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2001-08-01 06:54 AM

My heart pounds heavy with these words, your heart sounds full of giving and of hope, you pen well words of wisdom and romance.
Very well written Lady in White.

Rick

Much enjoyed.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2001-08-01 07:47 AM

My heart pounds heavy with these words, your heart sounds full of giving and of hope, you pen well words of wisdom and romance.
Very well written.
Much enjoyed.
Rick

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-08-02 10:05 AM

All encompassing indeed. There is no such thing as fate; only God's will. But we poets will write of fate and happenstance because it is (1) easier, and (2) more readily accepted by the "masses."

http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/Interloper.htm

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-08-02 10:20 AM

Lady,
Without black you can't have white. *L*

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-08-03 01:06 AM

As always, greatly enjoyed. Thank you.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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