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Dulcinea
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0 posted 2001-07-25 03:05 PM


Pagoda Dreams (tanka)

Wilted lotus leaves
Blossoms ceremonious
Tea candles flicker
Wafting breeze sweet scents aloft
Calling heart, pagoda dreams


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1 posted 2001-07-25 03:08 PM


yes.. lovely images and feel.. I enjoyed!
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2 posted 2001-07-25 03:09 PM


this is so vivid and beautiful   you did a wonderful job of bringing the images to mind  

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3 posted 2001-07-25 03:09 PM


Enjoyed!  

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4 posted 2001-07-25 03:14 PM


Cpat Hair,
thank you very much! I am so glad you enjoyed it!  

SEA, thank you for seeing the images...

Jamie, Thank you so much for dropping in.  

Everyone, your comments are very much appreciated!  

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5 posted 2001-07-25 06:45 PM


such peaceful, lovely images...!
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6 posted 2001-07-25 06:57 PM


So exotic! A giant garden of senses in very few words! Thank you.
Sincerely,
Rwood

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2001-07-25 09:02 PM


VAS, I am glad you liked it, Thank you!  

rwood, so glad you enjoyed this, thank you very much!  

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8 posted 2001-07-26 05:23 AM


Yes I like this...James
Dulcinea
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9 posted 2001-07-26 08:32 PM


Thank you very much James!  
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10 posted 2001-07-28 09:02 PM


very well done. . . such wonderful images. . .  

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Constance
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11 posted 2001-07-28 09:40 PM


You made me want to go there. Lovely.


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12 posted 2001-07-28 10:07 PM


Enjoyed

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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