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Drifting Heart
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Drifting Heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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How dare you look at me like you somehow still care, when your own feelings your no longer willing to share? You look at me as though I'm hurting you in some way, but you are the only one who walked away that day. You expect me to tell you what it is that's wrong with me, if you would search deep enough you would already be able to see. I don't know what it is that I'm feeling any more, should I keep this open or should I shut the door? This heart feels so heavy because it needs a quiet rest, I've never been able to offer anything more than just my best. It has never quite actually seemed to have been enough, and I am so very tired of dealing with all of this kind of stuff. So how dare you look at me like you somehow still care when you have left my heart to drift, hanging out there~ SOMEWHERE? On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you have said it well... I enjoyed |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Very heartfelt...well done! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your words are not only poetic in rhyme and flow but they also hold a lesson within them to us all. Someone that couldn't be happy with you giving your all probably isn't able to appreciate anything in life and will remain lost until they actually give some of themselves. Wonderful write and a very graceful way of expressing yourself poetically. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cpat, glad that you enjoyed, thank you muchly!  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cindi, it came from the heart. Thanks alot for the read. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mark, I don't know so much about the graceful part. I was actually feeling very saddened by it, but your words ring so true. Until he can give of himself and appreciate life, he will surely remain lost. Just wish there was some way for him to find his own end to his journey, and in the meantime, I just pray he will be blessed and his spirit will guide him. Babbling again.....but thanks MUCH!! Your words always show such wisdom to me, I am grateful for that. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of the feelings of a drifting heart...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes GS, what to do with the heart when the love is over?? the only thing to do is just to let it drift for a while. . . but not too far away. . . wonderful words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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