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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Let me drink again From the cup you offer Filled to the brim with passion That slides down my throat Like cold broken glass As it quenches the fire And builds another… Intoxicating me With each sip. Like the drunkard I am addicted to the liquor of your lips, The wine of your body. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
What an addiction....and habit forming, I fear.... but I can't let go for fear of not reading more as excellent as this.... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Filled to the brim with passion That slides down my throat Like cold broken glass Yet we drink time and again...addiction indeed. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh, oh, oh....let me have a drink of that...I am parched  great work on this one  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Very enticing! Certainly an addiction! Great write! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
quote: Great simile Great poem There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Oh...very nice! (forgive me though, the part about the broken glass was a bit hard to swallow)...  ( I know...I am a stinker...but the rest was very passionate! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
....so..........thirsty........must.....have.......more........ I liked this VERY much! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
To me.... The familar pain of addiction is the broken glass.... Thank You |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Broken glass, eh? I can only imagine what it must feel like when you relieve yourself of this addiction... ;-> -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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