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wandering glider
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0 posted 2001-07-25 10:48 AM




SCREAMS


downtown

the sterility screams
as if it had a voice

and it does

in echoes choes hoes oes es s

from facetttttttted faces

   reflected~detcelfer

                     reflected~detcelfer

                                       reflected~detcelfer

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-07-25 10:54 AM



What a write!  Captivating!

VAS
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2 posted 2001-07-25 11:03 AM


Amazing write...a bit of a challeng for an early morning, half started brain

Well done!


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3 posted 2001-07-25 11:05 AM


very creative...and thought provoking..

I enjoyed

wandering glider
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4 posted 2001-07-25 01:52 PM


Decaflame, VAS, Cpat Hair:
Thanks for reading.  Glad you enjoyed.
(This was written "straight" the other morning, but it just wouldn't lay still.  It begged to be done "concrete" style.)
            

       \\
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       //

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5 posted 2001-07-26 12:03 PM


And excellent this was indeed! It screamed to be done that style too, had to be!

~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack)

wandering glider
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6 posted 2001-07-26 01:47 PM


Mysteria,
Thanks, and you are right, it had to be!

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